OMFG
Your animation is OMFG amazing, but your storylines and diologue could use some work. In the part where *good* approaches *bad* and says "Let's skip the little talk, shall we?", he sould've said "Let's skip the small talk" lose the "shall we", because "let's" is an implied, ruder form of shall we. So saying "Let's skip the little talk, shall we?", is basically the same as saying "Shall we skip the little talk? Shall we?"... It makes no sense. This line bothered me a lot. After I read it I couldn't stop thinking about it. This proves how important diologue is. Anyway, I love your animation and it's OMFG amazing.. So you get a perfect 10 anyway.